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shi March 1st, 2011, 9:54 am

Something Kinda awesome happened with the colors on this page. Especially Kegan's shirt, so lovely! Actually, I just like this page overall, and it was relatively faster than the others, probably because I planned it out before I started. I really want to get faster (insert lots of exclamation marks), because I want so bad to update twice a week, but right now that's not going to happen. Not to mention the next page is giving me hell. sigh~

So yeah, uhh, plot twist? Maybe? Kegan rarely drinks, but he'll make special exceptions, and this seemed like a good one. My reference for his drink was a glass of apple juice, haha. In the notebook in panel 3 I actually wrote a somewhat cohesive journal entry, but scaled down you can't tell, which was the original point, so I got a little carried away.

Love it if you voted! The new incentive is some facial sketches of Brook, the trickster and token girl of the main cast. Love. Her. So. Much.

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eishiya March 1st, 2011, 10:21 am

Ah, I want to update twice a week too. Let's work on that togetherrrrr *stalkstalk*

I think his shirt might be a little too bright for the setting, it stands out a bit much. It does look wonderful aside from that, though.

And eee diffracted light! Thank you for not failing at it AND not getting too carried away with it.

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Cafe March 1st, 2011, 11:03 am

Unknown caller is why Kegan keeps finding Gunner? :'D

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ukiiukii March 1st, 2011, 12:33 pm

UNF UNF DEM BACKGROUNDS.

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Mouse&Pencil March 1st, 2011, 8:04 pm

I really did think Kegan's drink was apple juice. XD Aww, darn. I like apple juice.

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motherdevampire March 2nd, 2011, 5:46 pm

hide mr vampire! Hide!

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Tallinn March 5th, 2011, 11:33 am

I wish I could read that page ^^
And I love your characters. Can't wait to see the other ones appear :)

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Rori March 24th, 2011, 1:50 am

This is looking good, like the shirt, too. You're smart to wait until you KNOW you can update twice weekly to make the commitment to do it more frequently, that kinda thing is hard to take back :)

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KuDu April 15th, 2011, 2:38 am

the more i read, the more i wanna punch him :(

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kill-the-damsel June 10th, 2011, 2:08 am

Uhhh, if I squint a lot I can almost make out what the book says in the 3rd panel. But then I can't o .o